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Is directly showing a characters inner thoughts and conversations with themselves too telly or cheesy?

4 answers · posted 7y ago by Allan Smithy‭ · last activity 5y ago by System‭

Question style showing-telling dialogue show

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System‭ · 2019-12-08T07:51:16Z (almost 5 years ago)

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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/33012
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/

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Allan Smithy‭ · 2019-12-08T07:51:16Z (almost 5 years ago)

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Is directly showing a characters inner thoughts and conversations with themselves too telly or cheesy?

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System‭ · 2018-02-04T03:42:02Z (almost 7 years ago)

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Original score: 5