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I think that depends on the nature of your narrator. If it is third person limited (the narrator only described the thoughts and feelings of one character, and the story is told by following that c...
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2019-12-08T07:57:50Z (almost 5 years ago)
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I think that depends on the nature of your narrator. If it is third person limited (the narrator only described the thoughts and feelings of one character, and the story is told by following that character), then I think you break the reader's expectations by knowing something that character does not. In third-person omniscient, it should be fine, the narrator knows everything, including things the characters do not.
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2018-02-14T21:09:46Z (almost 7 years ago)
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