Prepare for more after the "ending"?
In my story, there's this big bad, who needs to be destroyed. That is the main goal for about the last third of the video game. So the group of heroes manages to destroy him! ... but I don't want to end the story there. For as it turns out, that last third is actually the second to last quarter of the story and there's another quarter more to come!
There are a lot of loose ends that need to be tied up and lots of things that went behind the scenes that I want to show, such as the actions of a very important character, which had a huge impact on the story. Long story short: if that character didn't do what they did, everyone, and I really mean EVERYONE, would be dead. So I'd like to think that this is pretty important info to convey.
I also want to show some of the fallout and how people deal with their lives after the events, after the big bad is destroyed. One of the main characters for example, a little girl (11 years old), lost her older sister (20 years old), who sacrificed herself and died a truly horrible death to save the little girl and many other people. She was like a mother to the little girl in some way, so the loss of her had a huge impact on her. Some characters, on the other hand, suddenly have families, which they don't know how to deal with, which creates its own set of problems because of previous events.
Then there are other (brave) characters, who are cleaning up the rest of the big bad's mess, so any dangerous remnants of him are gone. One of the characters ends up being corrupted by the big bad because of an earlier event, which turns into the question: "should we kill him and risk the big bad coming back or kill him and end his suffering?"
How can I prepare the player for that? I don't want to overstay my welcome, so I want to make clear that there is more after the big bad is destroyed. I don't want this to be just about destroying the big bad (as it's not even the focus for the first two thirds of the story - see below), I want to show what the big bad would've affected if he wasn't destroyed: the future.
Some info about the big bad
He is an unknown entity during most of the game, most characters don't even get to see him. Most characters aren't even aware of his existence. They don't know who he is, what his goals are and why he's doing any of this. In the beginning, they are simply trapped in his world/dimension/whatever and the only goal is to survive and escape a hostile environment.
As time passes and the characters find out more and more, they see how big of a threat the big bad really is to the rest of the world. Even though they find a way to escape, they find out that the big bad would cause chaos and destruction in about 30 years if they don't stop him now - and they do find a way to stop him. Most of the characters would feel uncomfortable knowing their children (and their children) would face the wrath of the big bad in the future if he's not stopped right now.
Because the story has an emphasis on the future and how everyone is going to live their lives, I want to show the players what they accomplished, what kind of future they saved. It's not going to be a happy ending for all characters, but I do want to show what happens to all the surviving characters, even if they end up living a (mostly) miserable life.
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I don't know about video game fiction; in novels and movies, epilogues are typically very short, and used for the explanation of the future. In a movie, just a few minutes (2 or 3 pages, about 2% of length), in a book, perhaps 4% or 5% of length.
To accomplish what you want in a standard storytelling mode, you need to make killing the main villain not enough to end the danger: The villain has set into motion magic or technology that must also be stopped.
That is the thing your characters can discover before they have their confrontation with the villain and destroy him, he has a "dead man switch" so if he dies, others events are triggered to destroy the world (or something like that, cause great suffering).
So perhaps, knowing this, they don't even want to destroy him, they want to capture him, but on the brink of failure in trying to capture him, they kill him. That victory is now only a partial victory and they know it. Do something in the game so they do, the spirit of the villain splits into five parts and zoom away for parts unknown, evils no longer imprisoned by his life force. Easier to defeat, but if allowed to grow, they may join forces again and be worse than the main villain.
So now off they go to complete the mission and exterminate the pieces, wherever they hid. (They may know where, or may need to discover where, your choice). In the process they discover an escalation of other truths (the secrets you want them to know), from small to large, with your biggest secret the last, when they have cleaned up the final fragment of evil spirit. Perhaps that last threatens the life of the one side character that saved them all, for example.
Then victory is complete, the hidden hero gets his due recognition and gratitude, the clouds part for the first time in years and golden sunlight brings vibrant color to the forests and gardens, and life to the lakes and streams, and joy to the populace.
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How can I prepare the player for that?
You don't.
It's quite simple: you don't want to prepare your player throughout the game of this aspect. You want it to be something special. Most games end when destroying the Big Bad End Boss, but you want to make your game special by giving your players more after the normal goal. There are some ways to hint at extra content, such as currently inaccessible landmarks if you insist on making it obvious that something will happen after the boss is defeated.
Think about making a second playthrough
But you should think about whether you want to make this the last quarter of the game or whether you want to make it a second playthrough. Look at other games for examples of how this can be done effectively. my favourite example is Nier Automata.
Following are spoilers for Nier Automata - you have been warned.
In the game you first start controlling the main character on her journey to kill the bad guys. In the end she manages do just that - kill the bad guys. It's a happy ending with the bad being dead and the good being not dead. The player feels a sense of accomplishment and thinks he is done.
But then the game tells you that there are huge parts missing and that you should definitely play a second time.
So you play a second time from the point of view of her helper. There is a lot of nostalgia, seeing everything again, but from a different point of view and there are lots of details shown that make you think that the solution may not have been as perfect as you have thought after the first playthrough.
After that the game tells you that there is still something missing. And this is where your idea comes into play.
The third playthrough continues from where the other two left off. And trust me, it's not a happy ending this time. There are lots of aspects uncovered, little things that were hidden in the other playthroughs, a new character is introduced and there are difficult decisions to be done by the player that will change the ending you get.
A second/ third/ ... playthrough allows to focus on different characters
By making your exposition a second playthrough you could switch your point of view and you could explore the problems that arise from the previous solution. If you want to look at multiple characters you could easily make multiple such playthroughs. They are basically just additional chapters, but Nier Automata managed to make the player feel like they already beat the game and then they had the chance to continue and find out what happened afterwards and how the story continues for the main characters.
Hints at other playthroughs could be shown by using different unaccessible story bits - treasure chests that can't be opened, paths that can't be visited, people that can't talk (yet), ...
The game did have some spoilers. There were certain treasure chests that the main character in the first playthrough couldn't open, though it was never completely clear whether you would simply get a new ability at some point or whether you had to use a different character. The second playthrough established a few loose ends that needed to be tied together by showing different aspects and motivations of evil enemies. You suddenly wanted to know more about them and get to know them - and if you were careful and looked around you often found out that you didn't really want to hurt them. But you had to. For the greater good... Right...?
Make your game feel special by giving your players something more to do after playing through the game
You want your players to feel the same way. You don't want to make it too obvious that there is more at the end and you want your game to feel complete after defeating the final boss. But then you want to give the player the chance to explore more if they want to get to know more.
Making it a different part allows your players to decide for themselves whether they liked the original ending or the bonus content more
This gives your player the chance to change from a simple Be the main good guy!-story to a fascinating What are the ramifications of my actions?-story and may leave your players with a better feeling. Those who liked the first ending can simply say "I didn't like the additional stuff", while the other players can say "I loved how the story picked up the pieces at the end and went in a different direction". You will make both sides happy.
If you instead made this a chapter you would force everyone to accept the second ending. Leaving it up to your player will make it easier for them to feel good remembering your game. There are different types of story-tellers and there are different types of story-listeners.
Possible ways to hint at extra content
If you want to hint at a second playthrough or an additional chapter you can use the approach mentioned above. Simply place items, locations or characters somewhere that are inaccessible to your players and let them figure out that they can get there and see more about your world once they are done. Maybe the Big Bad Evil Boss had a special item. Or your characters gained new abilities. Or maybe the destruction of the Boss changed the landscape for whatever reason. Or maybe people are just suddenly more willing to talk. Or people could suddenly move around more freely and someone from RandomCity1 could help you with a little sidequest in ChanceTown3.
There are many possibilities and even if you simply add a new town "12 years later" you can get your players to enjoy the additional bits of aftermath that you want to show them.
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