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I agree with @MarkBaker, that, in this case, there aren't many ways to express the line your character says. However, you could try to show something about the character that matches his/her beha...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T08:01:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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storbror
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2019-12-08T08:01:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
I agree with @MarkBaker, that, in this case, there aren't many ways to express the line your character says. However, you could try to show something about the character that matches his/her behavior/reaction, if you wanna make it more obvious e.g.: > "Oooooo!" they said, standing for a moment with glowing eyes and their mouth still open.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-02-20T15:07:55Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 4