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This is an excerpt from a novel I have started writing. Penry laughed. His face changed instantly. His disbelief changed into happiness, into almost the serenity in my dreams. It seemed to b...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T08:07:57Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/33713 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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David Doyle
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2019-12-08T08:07:57Z (over 4 years ago)
This is an excerpt from a novel I have started writing. > Penry laughed. His face changed instantly. His disbelief changed into happiness, into almost the serenity in my dreams. It seemed to be the same feeling I had when… Then it hit me! I knew it. He was going to attempt to exit the Luzerne area, with this long haired stranger. I want to continue with it saying that 'I' woke up and then I say to the reader directly "don't worry, it's not a dream". Is this a proper writing style, considering that I am not actually the narrator?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-02-23T02:58:00Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 5