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I'm starting my story with my protagonist found (by the police), bleeding at a crime scene. When he wakes up, he has no recollection i.e. he's lost his memory. He's interrogated by two Inspectors,...
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System
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2019-12-08T08:16:30Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Adi219
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2019-12-08T08:16:30Z (over 4 years ago)
I'm starting my story with my protagonist found (by the police), bleeding at a crime scene. When he wakes up, he has no recollection i.e. he's lost his memory. He's interrogated by two Inspectors, but as he doesn't remember anything, it's mostly a one-sided conversation with the Inspectors essentially describing the crime scene. **My Question** : How can I avoid such long 'walls' of one-sided dialogue and make the description more interesting for the reader?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-03-12T11:52:50Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 10