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I have a character in my story who has the habit of making philosophic observations about life and the functioning of things, or his opinion/vision about something. Although most of his observati...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T08:26:41Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Yuuza
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2019-12-08T08:26:41Z (over 4 years ago)
I have a character in my story who has the habit of making philosophic observations about life and the functioning of things, or his opinion/vision about something. Although most of his observations make the story better with them, some don't or not much, but they also don't make it worse, it's simply dispensable. I, however, added these "unnecessary" observations because I found them interesting and fitting in the context of the situation, but they don't help progress the plot or add to the story, it's just his observation. So can I add/keep these or should I keep only what is necessary?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-03-31T07:02:47Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 16