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Q&A Am I changing POVs if I'm describing what two or more characters are sensing (touch, smell, sound, etc.)?

Am I changing POVs if I'm describing what two or more characters are sensing (touch, smell, sound, etc.)? I know it's not okay to jump from one POV to another. Example: Anna was afraid he'd not...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Klara Raškaj‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T08:26:59Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/34737
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Klara Raškaj‭ · 2019-12-08T08:26:59Z (almost 5 years ago)
Am I changing POVs if I'm describing what two or more characters are sensing (touch, smell, sound, etc.)? I know it's not okay to jump from one POV to another. Example:

> Anna was afraid he'd notice she was embarrassed, but Ian thought she was the most beautiful creature he'd ever seen.

However, I want to know whether that also counts for explaining what a character is sensing. Example:

> Nina was hit by lavender smoke as she walked past the house. Jenny's nostrils started to itch, and her eyes water when she took a whiff of the flowers.

Is the second example okay, or does it count as changing POVs?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-04-01T14:01:35Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 3