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For example: A YOUNG MAN drifts into a bar. Something absent in his yes. His varsity jaket, dirty and torn. Blood still drips down his face from the accident. This is -- JAMES SMITH, 17, the boy n...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T08:28:57Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/34826 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Marcus Meier
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2019-12-08T08:28:57Z (over 4 years ago)
For example: A YOUNG MAN drifts into a bar. Something absent in his yes. His varsity jaket, dirty and torn. Blood still drips down his face from the accident. This is -- JAMES SMITH, 17, the boy next door, capitan of the football team, and one hell of a bad driver. ;) I’ve seen this in various scripts and I have a few descriptions setup like this in my current script. But now I’m questioning if this is okay. Should I not ALL CAPS young man? Or not do this setup at all? Thanks!
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-04-04T15:06:01Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 1