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"Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat ru...
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#7: Post edited
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Prahara
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2020-06-12T13:16:56Z (over 4 years ago)
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can use. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
- -----
- Italics:
- Mark leaned over seat, spying on John's phone.
> _Have my money donkey???_, was first incoming message <p>- _I will have it by the midnight_ John nervously tapped the reply, drop of sweat hanging from his eyebrow
- >
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can use. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
- -----
- Italics:
- Mark leaned over seat, spying on John's phone.
- > _Have my money donkey???_ was first incoming message <p>
- _I will have it by the midnight_ John nervously tapped the reply, drop of sweat hanging from his eyebrow
- >
#6: Post edited
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Prahara
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2020-06-12T13:16:18Z (over 4 years ago)
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can use. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
- -----
- Italics:
- Mark leaned over seat, spying on John's phone.
- > _Have my money donkey???_, was first incoming message <p>
_I will have it by the midnight_,John nervously tapped the reply, drop of sweat hanging from his eyebrow- >
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can use. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
- -----
- Italics:
- Mark leaned over seat, spying on John's phone.
- > _Have my money donkey???_, was first incoming message <p>
- _I will have it by the midnight_ John nervously tapped the reply, drop of sweat hanging from his eyebrow
- >
#5: Post edited
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Prahara
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2020-06-12T13:15:58Z (over 4 years ago)
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can use. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can use. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
- -----
- Italics:
- Mark leaned over seat, spying on John's phone.
- > _Have my money donkey???_, was first incoming message <p>
- _I will have it by the midnight_,John nervously tapped the reply, drop of sweat hanging from his eyebrow
- >
#4: Post edited
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Prahara
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2020-06-12T13:07:14Z (over 4 years ago)
#3: Post edited
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Prahara
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2020-06-12T13:06:51Z (over 4 years ago)
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can see. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can use. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
#2: Post edited
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Prahara
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2020-06-12T13:06:00Z (over 4 years ago)
> "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can see. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
- > "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice<p>
- "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be."
- >
- In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can see. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call.
- With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear
#1: Initial revision
by
Prahara
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2020-06-12T13:05:26Z (over 4 years ago)
> "Have my money, donkey?" said man on the other side of phone with hostility in his rough voice "I promise I will get the dosh by the midnight," said John into the phone nervously, drop of sweat running from his forehead "just leave her be." > In this example I chose to describe one man on the other side of phone by only input I can get - his voice. Second one I used additional sense - eyesight which observer can see. It should be enough to indicate that MC is listening to phone call in presence of one of the participants, close enough to hear second participant of the phone call. With this you can format it in quotes because all voices are present in the scene forming a dialogue which MC can hear