How are descriptions and character thoughts handled in a screenplay (versus a novel)
I wonder if you write descriptions in a screenplay the same way you write in a novel. For example, I see writers describe the physical effects of the emotion of anger rather than just saying 'angry', do we do the same thing in a screenplay? Or do we just say the emotion and let the actor act it out in his way? What exactly should we do?
Another example is when we write character thoughts in a novel, can we do the same in a screenplay? Again what should we do in this situation?
Basically what are the differences and similarities between writing these kinds of things for a screenplay and for a novel?
This post was sourced from https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/35329. It is licensed under CC BY-SA 3.0.
1 answer
Expressions:
You can say something besides "angry", there are many flavors of anger, but no, do not describe the facial features. That is directing; do not try to do the director's job in your screenplay. You might say "coldly furious" if it is important to convey the demeanor of Jack and what he does next or says next. You might say "Jack ROARS in fury and slams the iphone on the table, breaking the screen, then throws it across the room, accidentally breaking three of Mary's antique ceramic figurines." (Because the audience knows that Mary will notice this, due to the pride in her collection we saw earlier.)
Even that might not make the final cut, the director can change this to something else.
Character Thoughts:
NEVER. A screenplay consists ONLY of things the audience can SEE and HEAR. NOTHING ELSE. If they can't see it, you don't write it. If anything, "Jack appears ashamed and turns to hide it." The audience can see that (and exactly how Jack shows shame is up to the actor and director; not you).
A screenplay is told ONLY through dialogue, setting, and action. Absolutely nothing the audience (or director) cannot see or hear. For example, even in a setting, you will be marked an amateur for "a sense of forboding hung over the city, the air seemed thick with it." How do you film "forboding" and "air thick with it"? Do you mean it is overcast? Foggy? Then say that. Don't say "the tension was thick." I can't film that. Stay specific, stay visual/auditory.
0 comment threads
0 comment threads