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Q&A Help with my story - elements of a scene

A girl being pulled into a room by a man against her will is going to assume she is about to be raped, and possibly murdered in the bargain. She will scream for that, and fight that, even if she is...

posted 6y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-19T22:13:23Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/35354
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T08:35:39Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/35354
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T08:35:39Z (over 4 years ago)
A girl being pulled into a room by a man against her will is going to assume she is about to be raped, and possibly murdered in the bargain. She will scream for that, and fight that, even if she is being overpowered. Do not forget she has a voice, she has teeth, she has arms and legs and feet to kick with and fight with.

Do not let her surrender to her fate, she can stomp, kick, knee, swing, elbow, bite, scream repeatedly, and even use her head to butt him in the face. A girl fighting for her life is not passive and should not just give in. She should fight to the end. If possible, make it cost your vampire some pain.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-04-21T12:22:04Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 6