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Add another dimension to the conflict so it is not a simple will he/won't he. There is something (a crutch, a flaw) he is unwilling to give up before he can move to the next stage. Committing to S...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T08:39:47Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/35684 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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wetcircuit
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2019-12-08T08:39:47Z (over 4 years ago)
Add another dimension to the conflict so it is not a simple _will he_/_won't he_. There is something (a crutch, a flaw) he is unwilling to give up before he can move to the next stage. Committing to Space Marines means giving up another dream, or it means compromising an important relationship. His goal is to have it all, but he only gets half.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-04-28T21:22:47Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 3