Communities

Writing
Writing
Codidact Meta
Codidact Meta
The Great Outdoors
The Great Outdoors
Photography & Video
Photography & Video
Scientific Speculation
Scientific Speculation
Cooking
Cooking
Electrical Engineering
Electrical Engineering
Judaism
Judaism
Languages & Linguistics
Languages & Linguistics
Software Development
Software Development
Mathematics
Mathematics
Christianity
Christianity
Code Golf
Code Golf
Music
Music
Physics
Physics
Linux Systems
Linux Systems
Power Users
Power Users
Tabletop RPGs
Tabletop RPGs
Community Proposals
Community Proposals
tag:snake search within a tag
answers:0 unanswered questions
user:xxxx search by author id
score:0.5 posts with 0.5+ score
"snake oil" exact phrase
votes:4 posts with 4+ votes
created:<1w created < 1 week ago
post_type:xxxx type of post
Search help
Notifications
Mark all as read See all your notifications »
Q&A

Post History

50%
+0 −0
Q&A How to derive a first sentence from a story?

There is much advice out there on "how to write a killer opening line". Usually these blog posts or how-to-write book chapters list examples of first sentences from recognized masterworks or group ...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T08:43:00Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/35826
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T08:43:00Z (almost 5 years ago)
There is much advice out there on "how to write a killer opening line". Usually these blog posts or how-to-write book chapters list examples of first sentences from recognized masterworks or group them into categories [such as](http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/7-ways-to-create-a-killer-opening-line-for-your-novel):

1. A statement of eternal principle
2. A statement of simple fact
3. A statement of paired facts

and so on.

Using that advice, I can come up with a hundred intriguing opening sentences, _none of which fit my book_. Because what none of the advice out there tells me is:

How to write a killer opening line _for my book_. Not just some random opening for a non-existent book, but one that **opens _my_ story**.

To find a first sentence for a story I have plotted, I cannot simply use the advice to write "a statement of eternal principle". A sentence such as "The sun rises in the east" does not fit many books, although it is a statement of an eternal principle.

So there has to be something more to writing an opening sentence. There has to be some way to _find_ the opening that is _inherent in your story_. Some way to boil down your story until the first sentence remains.

So what proven methods are there to derive an opening line from a story?

* * *

This question is not about _beginnings_, which I have asked about [here](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/35807/how-to-open-a-novel).

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-05-02T16:38:29Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 19