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Q&A Hate to love, love to hate

I was reviewing my first draft and realized: I need a better antagonist. I have a flat, unspecified, weak organization with a stereotypically evil guy who are absolutely easy to defeat. I need an...

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by FoxElemental‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T08:45:16Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar FoxElemental‭ · 2019-12-08T08:45:16Z (almost 5 years ago)
I was reviewing my first draft and realized:

_I need a better antagonist._

I have a flat, unspecified, weak organization with a stereotypically evil guy who are absolutely easy to defeat. I need an antagonist whom I love to hate (i.e., you'd rip him/her apart with your bare hands) and at the same time hate to love – a tragic, motivated character who has their own, plausible, honest/well-intentioned motives and reasons. A character who makes your heart ache while making you angry.

And:

- A separate antagonist and protagonist (they can't be the same character)
- I'm willing to change the (evil) organization the antagonist belongs to and the (good) organization the protagonist belongs to
- I'm willing to change the protagonist (but not the side characters.)

How can I develop an antagonist that fits these requirements?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-05-06T00:03:26Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 8