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You don't necessarily need to distinguish the two. If you write, for example, Dan stared out of the window of the classroom. A green park spread outside. Tulips and Hyacinths were in full bloom...
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2019-12-12T21:57:22Z (about 5 years ago)
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2019-12-08T08:52:55Z (about 5 years ago)
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You don't necessarily need to distinguish the two. If you write, for example, > Dan stared out of the window of the classroom. A green park spread outside. Tulips and Hyacinths were in full bloom. Inside, the teacher droned on about something. You are both narrating the setting (classroom, spring), and showing the character's boredom and desire to be outside.
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2018-05-22T12:13:25Z (over 6 years ago)
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