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Q&A Breaking up a talky piece of writing

Dialogue is my favorite thing to write. I tend to use a lot of dialogue in my writing, which sometimes results in long, talky passages -- a bit similar to this question about breaking up exposition...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Chris Sunami‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T08:54:29Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/36368
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar Chris Sunami‭ · 2019-12-08T08:54:29Z (over 4 years ago)
Dialogue is my favorite thing to write. I tend to use a lot of dialogue in my writing, which sometimes results in long, talky passages -- a bit similar to [this question about breaking up exposition](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/3811/how-can-i-break-up-a-lengthy-explanation). The dialogue I'm talking about isn't necessarily infodumping, however. It's just long stretches where my characters are mainly talking to each other.

What's the best way to make this more interesting for the reader? Is it a sign of deeper, structural issues? Or is it something that can be tweaked?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-05-23T15:36:06Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 14