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I'm creating some copy describing new web-app features for a number of different audiences (users, managers of sections of the site, owners of sub-sites which use our platform etc.). I'm finding m...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:30:57Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/2474 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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robomc
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2019-12-08T01:30:57Z (over 4 years ago)
I'm creating some copy describing new web-app features for a number of different audiences (users, managers of sections of the site, owners of sub-sites which use our platform etc.). I'm finding myself using 'users' constantly: > "Users will now be able to..." > > "...opens up the creation of $feature to users..." > > "...excited to see the creative ways our users will..." I'm getting sick of the word. It feels ugly to me, and a bit jargony, and sort of unfriendly. Any good alternatives? In some cases I can replace 'users' with 'you'. But for two of these pieces, I'm addressing audiences who wont be using the features themselves, so the second person wont be appropriate.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-04-12T21:58:24Z (about 13 years ago)
Original score: 11