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Q&A How do I write a shriek?

I'm gonna answer from experience as a reader, instead of a writer. When you make your character shriek you usually want to send a shiver down your reader's spine. There have been many suggestions...

posted 6y ago by xDaizu‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T09:10:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar xDaizu‭ · 2019-12-08T09:10:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm gonna answer from experience as a reader, instead of a writer.

When you make your character **shriek** you usually want to send a shiver down your reader's spine. There have been many suggestions about describing the shriek instead of using an [onomatopoeia](http://www.dictionary.com/browse/onomatopoeia) and they are great, but if you have your heart set on using it, or it's more appropiate for your medium because you lack a narrator (like it can often happen in comics or videogames), I've always found "AIIEEEEE" to have a particularly strong impact:

[![https://i.pinimg.com/736x/34/7a/ce/347acef0ddf2b90542cd13a4688ad4f4--horror-comics-the-farmer.jpg](https://i.stack.imgur.com/Uq34w.jpg)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/Uq34w.jpg)[![enter image description here](https://i.stack.imgur.com/HK3Zu.jpg)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/HK3Zu.jpg)

When I read the question title: **"How do I write a shriek?"** I immediately thought of the first time I saw this onomatopoeia: It was in the videogame _"Monkey Island"_, and the expression got burned in my impressionable kid mind.

Graphic adventures (and 90's RPGs) were a lot like books or comics. They communicated a lot of character with just wording and a few pixels, and there was an impact in that onomatopoeia that I just hadn't experienced before with any other written scream, and I couldn't explain why.

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_Note: Unfortunately, I couldn't find an image of that exact moment of the game, will edit if I do._

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-06-20T11:49:07Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 4