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Q&A How to write dialogue for someone who is intelligent but barely speaks the language?

The other answers here are all to do with making the character come across as intelligent in conversation. There is a flip-side to this, which probably bears mention: Non-verbal cues. Consider t...

posted 6y ago by Chronocidal‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T09:15:03Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Chronocidal‭ · 2019-12-08T09:15:03Z (over 4 years ago)
The other answers here are all to do with making the character come across as intelligent in **conversation**. There is a flip-side to this, which probably bears mention: Non-verbal cues. Consider the following scene:

> Protagonist **_A_** is waiting for Character **_B_** in a café, reading a newspaper to pass the time. When **_B_** arrives, **_A_** folds the newspaper, places it on the table, and starts the conversation. After a couple of minutes, socially-inept **_C_** suddenly bounds up and starts chatting away at **_A_** , completely ignoring **_B_**.
> 
> By the time **_A_** finally extricates themself from the (rather one-sided) verbal deluge, they notice that **_B_** has passed the time by getting out a pencil and working through the one of the harder logic-puzzles (sudoku, nonogram, etc) in the newspaper with remarkable efficiency.

This, of course, only works for certain expressions of intelligence - for a musical prodigy or a skilled tailor you would need a differenct scenario - but it's like this: If you want to indicate that someone is a mechanical genius, do you have them talk about sprocket design, escapement mechanism and gear ratios, or do you have them casually strip down, repair and rebuild a broken clock with little more than a glasses-repair kit and a swiss-army knife?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-06-27T12:38:27Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 5