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A character in my story is supposed to be falling apart, for many reasons: He's 16 and is killing people, in a gladiatorial setting, of a similar age. He already died (possibly a few times), but ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T09:17:28Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/37391 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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weenmachine
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2019-12-08T09:17:28Z (over 4 years ago)
A character in my story is supposed to be falling apart, for many reasons: - He's 16 and is killing people, in a gladiatorial setting, of a similar age. - He already died (possibly a few times), but he and everyone he fought come back to life through cloning and memory transfer. I tried many things, from him not taking care of himself, up until drug use, but I don't think that's the best way to go about it. **How can I subtly imply that one of my main character's life is falling into a tailspin?**
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-07-02T19:43:06Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 6