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I am working on revising a petition because one of my friends said that it needs a lot of revision. For one, they said that it needed clarity, and for another, it needed to be concise. My question...
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clarity
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T09:19:14Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/37458 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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HeavenlyHarmony
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2019-12-08T09:19:14Z (almost 5 years ago)
I am working on revising a petition because one of my friends said that it needs a lot of revision. For one, they said that it needed clarity, and for another, it needed to be concise. My question is, isn't there a way to balance out both at the same time? The way I see it, if you are too vague, it's not very interesting, but it's very concise. On the other hand, if you are excessively detailed, it will bore out the reader. What's a good strategy to come towards the middle? [Here's what needs to be revised.](https://chn.ge/2IRMIjy)
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-07-05T11:15:21Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 6