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Speaking as a former division manager of a public company that has hired dozens of programmers and engineers and read hundreds of resumes: Use "I". It is expected. Stick to the facts, do not enga...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-19T22:13:29Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T09:21:27Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/37567 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
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Speaking as a former division manager of a public company that has hired dozens of programmers and engineers and read hundreds of resumes: Use "I". It is expected. Stick to the facts, do not engage in puffery, but do not be afraid to note very positive results; either (as you have). Do not be so stilted in your language. I would not use the word "utilize", "use" is sufficient. "Currently" is not necessary either. > Currently I am looking for internship opportunities that can utilize my existing programming skills and allow me to expand them further. > I would like an internship that uses my existing programming skills, with opportunities to expand them further. > ... My primary interests _are_ in ... > ... and _I_ am well versed ... I would not mention any other hobbies unless they directly relate to your technical skills. None of yours do (not even modding phones, which suggests you are a hacker). > My long term goal _is_ a career in Web/Android development. > Thank you for your consideration, my contact information is on my resume, and below: > Azat@example.com > Cell: 999-999-9999 > etc. Good luck.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-07-11T17:46:36Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 3