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It's a brilliant answer from Amadeus (as always). I'd like to add a technique for when you cannot find a metaphor/simile that hasn't already been overused: distracting with detail. For example, sa...
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System
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2019-12-08T09:21:51Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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GGx - Reinstate Monica Cellio
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2019-12-08T09:21:51Z (over 4 years ago)
It's a brilliant answer from Amadeus (as always). I'd like to add a technique for when you cannot find a metaphor/simile that hasn't already been overused: distracting with detail. For example, say I want to describe a man listening to me intently. If I were to write: > I’ve never met anyone with such focussed attention; he's a bird of prey. That's a cliché. But you can distract the reader from it with detail: > I’ve never met anyone with such focussed attention; he’s a bird of prey and I’ve snapped a twig in the undergrowth. Instead of seeing the bird of prey, a boring comparison, the reader sees a mouse, stepping on a twig, alerting the hawk to its presence and endangering its life, which is far less boring, yet still the same boring metaphor.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-07-12T13:41:57Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 11