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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/37771
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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/37771
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You are writing in English, your characters are going to speak English, but that is in fact a "translation convention", your characters "in reality" speaking German instead. Is that the issue you're asking about?

Such situations are in fact very common in writing. Consider a book translated from German to English - the situation would be just the same as you describe. And many books are written from the start just as you describe. For example, Jules Verne's _Les Enfants du capitaine Grant_ is a book written in French about a Scottish family.

What would be jarring is if your characters start using turns of phrase that are very location-specific: 'Megabucks' would only be used in America, 'lass' is most commonly used in Scotland, etc. When you use such words, your story says 'Germany', but the language says something else.

I guess it is possible for a way of thinking, a way of responding to a situation, to be "very American", "not how a German would respond". Cultural differences do exist. You should do your research about this - talk to someone from Germany, read about Germany. This shouldn't stop you from writing, though. End of the day, people are people, and globalisation makes us more and more alike.

Original score: 7