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Q&A How do you tell the reader that the setting is normal modern day?

It is easy enough, I would think: Contrive some reason to mention the year. Mike opened the box to unveil Nancy's birthday cake. "What do you think?" Alice looked and suppressed a laugh, ...

posted 6y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-19T22:13:31Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T09:33:50Z (over 4 years ago)
It is easy enough, I would think: Contrive some reason to mention the year.

> Mike opened the box to unveil Nancy's birthday cake. "What do you think?"
> 
> Alice looked and suppressed a laugh, the cake had nice flowers and vines, but he'd had piped on it, _Happy Birthday Nancy! 1978 -- 2018_.
> 
> "Oh my god, Mike, it looks like a tombstone!"
> 
> "You said don't say happy fortieth, and don't put forty candles, so what was I supposed to do?"
> 
> "Just _Happy Birthday Nancy_, and nothing else. How you ever got married is beyond me. Scrape the dates off."
> 
> "It will ruin it."
> 
> "I'll do it, dufus."

Or anything else that strikes you. In film, you will notice they do the same thing quite often, find an excuse to show or mention the current year, in passing, especially if it is the very near future. You can use Birthdays, anniversaries of people or major events. Like "President Fenhall is expected to lose support in the 2022 midterms... [blah blah blah]"

You can even use major events few people know of, or know the date of: Just work them into the conversation:

> As she sat down, Alice said, "The Fourth of July. Happy sixth anniversary, Mike!"
> 
> Frank frowned. "Anniversary? Did you get married and not tell me?"
> 
> Mike said, "Since the Higgs Boson was announced, of course. July fourth, twenty twelve. Thank you for remembering, Alice."
> 
> "Brainiacs," Frank said. "Why do I hang out with you guys?"
> 
> Alice knit her brow, pretending to think hard. "We're the only people that love you?"
> 
> Frank grinned as if suddenly enlightened. "I guess there's that! Thanks, Alice!"

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-08-03T21:47:13Z (almost 6 years ago)
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