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Q&A Anticlimactic ending as a surprise after climax?

Personally, I do not find this a satisfying ending, in fact in a way, it ruins the story. The villain's character arc was completed when he died in the major battle, they should have found his body...

posted 6y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-19T22:13:31Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T09:35:05Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T09:35:05Z (almost 5 years ago)
Personally, I do not find this a satisfying ending, in fact in a way, it ruins the story. The villain's character arc was completed when he died in the major battle, they should have found his body in the rubble.

So instead of the happily ever after ending you gave your heroes, after this incident, despite killing the demon, we have to think they will spend the rest of their lives looking over their shoulders for something else to happen. They are left with no peace, they must be warriors forever.

If you want an epilogue, hint at a "next generation" sequel, whether you ever write one or not. After starting these families and settling in, they discover their children have certain natural talents they recognize ...

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-08-06T13:35:18Z (about 6 years ago)
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