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Q&A How long can a fantasy novel stay in metaphorical Kansas?

I've read some books that open by introducing the main characters in their mundane lives by beginning each sub-section of chapter 1 with something like "3 days and 17 hours prior". For instance, th...

posted 6y ago by Melissa Alone‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T09:35:43Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Melissa Alone‭ · 2019-12-08T09:35:43Z (almost 5 years ago)
I've read some books that open by introducing the main characters in their mundane lives by beginning each sub-section of chapter 1 with something like "3 days and 17 hours prior". For instance, that would be followed by a couple pages that introduce main character and setting, then another subheader "2 days and 4 hour prior" begins the introduction of character 2 which goes on for a page or two, etc. until all necessary 'Kansas' characters/events/concepts have been introduced.

Some might think that heavy-handed, but I think it's an elegantly simple solution that could involve practically no re-writing, builds anticipation, and unambiguously let the reader know "hang on, the payoff is coming".

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-08-09T21:10:29Z (about 6 years ago)
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