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I'm describing a creature in my story, and I'm worried I'm using the word "it" too much. Is there a substitute I can use for the word? Can I keep using it? Beady eyes look back at him, inky and...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T09:37:31Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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honey bee
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2019-12-08T09:37:31Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm describing a creature in my story, and I'm worried I'm using the word "it" too much. Is there a substitute I can use for the word? Can I keep using it? > Beady eyes look back at him, inky and devoid of any emotion. The creature’s head is small and round, flesh green and sickly-looking. Its ears are long and thin, and its nose is nothing more than two penny-sized holes. Its mouth is open, sharp yellow teeth bared in a ferocious growl.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-08-12T01:19:48Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 3