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I think it's fine to have an up-down-up-down structure, but that one of the lows, probably the second one, should be significantly "lower" than the other one. Otherwise it does just feel like a re...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T09:43:52Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Chris Sunami
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2019-12-08T09:43:52Z (almost 5 years ago)
I think it's fine to have an up-down-up-down structure, but that one of the lows, probably the second one, should be significantly "lower" than the other one. Otherwise it does just feel like a repetition. Maybe experiencing the first low helps in some way in overcoming the second. Or the first foreshadows the second. But they should be discernibly different, and each should play a role.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-09-04T14:50:02Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 1