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If I have a sentence such as this: Footsteps were heard coming down the alley. Can I use that in a first-person story? I don't think it's technically third-person, but it sort of feels like i...
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System
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2019-12-08T09:45:21Z (about 5 years ago)
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Jared
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2019-12-08T09:45:21Z (about 5 years ago)
If I have a sentence such as this: > Footsteps were heard coming down the alley. Can I use that in a first-person story? I don't think it's technically third-person, but it sort of feels like it's coming from an omniscient narrator. I'm trying to avoid using the word "I" a lot: I heard, I saw, I felt, etc.
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System
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2018-09-05T21:13:50Z (over 6 years ago)
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