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Q&A How to simulate someone talking with a full mouth?

It depends on what sort of speech you tend to write. Personally, I would approach this like method acting. Write the character's script, make a sandwich, turn on a voice recorder, then read the scr...

posted 6y ago by Ian MacDonald‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T09:53:25Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Ian MacDonald‭ · 2019-12-08T09:53:25Z (almost 5 years ago)
It depends on what sort of speech you tend to write. Personally, I would approach this like method acting. Write the character's script, make a sandwich, turn on a voice recorder, then read the script with your mouth full.

When listening to the playback, write down what you hear. If it is meant to be unintelligible, don't try to shoehorn your original script in there to make words guessable. Have the narrator indicate why there is confusion and (probably) have the other characters ask for clarification (depending on the power dynamic of the group).

> I walked up to her and she greeted me with a "ghffuh mmnet". "What?" came my reflexive response. After she swallowed the bite of what looked to be a deliciously ripe tomato, she clarified herself: "'Just a minute', I said."

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-10-02T13:45:35Z (about 6 years ago)
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