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Q&A How long should I mention an injured character’s pain?

My main character gets shot and survives. One thing that bothers me is a character who is injured and keeps going like the energizer bunny. I try to set up for a rapid recovery, mentioning traini...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T10:02:06Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/39696
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar Rasdashan‭ · 2019-12-08T10:02:06Z (almost 5 years ago)
My main character gets shot and survives. One thing that bothers me is a character who is injured and keeps going like the energizer bunny.

I try to set up for a rapid recovery, mentioning training that instilled stoicism, etc, but there are times and situations when he will be in pain and show it.

I add some realism by mentioning changing dressings and have him try to patch himself up a bit before limping off etc.

I want to be reasonable in this situation, but a point comes when someone might say ‘enough already he’s hurt, get on with it’.

Should I just wait until I reach that point?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-10-28T23:44:06Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 19