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My story is told from the perspective of different satellites that are creating a narrative. There are over ten of these narrators. I'm wondering if this might appear confusing for readers if the v...
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System
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2019-12-08T10:03:20Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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shlomotion
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2019-12-08T10:03:20Z (about 5 years ago)
My story is told from the perspective of different satellites that are creating a narrative. There are over ten of these narrators. I'm wondering if this might appear confusing for readers if the voice of the author is never seen anywhere in the story. So every paragraph in the story has a different character attached to it as the narrator. I have several reasons for this. One is to detach a reader from any of the narrators. Don't bother forming any kind of connection to a narrator, because some of them appear once and never again. Another point is to establish a hierarchy. Without some characters first speaking, no one else can. In some way, I am intentionally trying to drown the readers in several narrators to the point where whoever is telling the story doesn't really matter. The story remains coherent with or without the narrators. **What is the best way to present this that won't confuse the reader?**
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-10-31T12:14:34Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 6