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How do I write this so that I get the point across that she's that way, but not making it sound overly lewd or off-putting? Make it funny. Since your viewpoint character is a woman, the best ...
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2019-12-12T21:42:33Z (almost 5 years ago)
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2019-12-08T10:04:52Z (almost 5 years ago)
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> How do I write this so that I get the point across that she's that way, but not making it sound overly lewd or off-putting? **Make it funny.** Since your viewpoint character is a woman, the best way to do this without being off-putting is to (depending on her own physique and personality) have her express "boob envy". Since you don't want it to be off-putting, go for the subtle approach: have her take one look at the other woman and then glance down at her own, more modest bust.
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2018-11-03T21:06:09Z (about 6 years ago)
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