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Q&A How do I draw attention to a girl's chest without making it overly lewd?

Portray the emotions of your viewpoint character. In general, when using a limited viewpoint you should only be describing the details that your viewpoint character notices. And how you describe a...

posted 5y ago by Arcanist Lupus‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T10:04:53Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Arcanist Lupus‭ · 2019-12-08T10:04:53Z (over 4 years ago)
## Portray the emotions of your viewpoint character.

In general, when using a limited viewpoint you should only be describing the details that your viewpoint character notices. And how you describe a detail should depend on _how_ they notice it.

Is your viewpoint character jealous? Is she sympathetic? Amazed? How comfortable is she with direct descriptions, or would she use euphemisms? Why is she noticing them? Let your viewpoint character's thoughts and feelings set the tone of the description.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-11-04T07:31:19Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 4