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I am pretty sure this isn't a proper question for this site, but I will answer. First, it's "I will argue" and not "I will arguing." Second, it's "cause unemployment" or "cause increasing numbe...
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2019-12-20T00:40:32Z (almost 5 years ago)
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2019-12-08T10:07:51Z (almost 5 years ago)
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I am pretty sure this isn't a proper question for this site, but I will answer. First, it's "I will argue" and not "I will arguing." Second, it's "cause unemployment" or "cause increasing numbers of unemployed workers" or "lead to a higher rate of unemployment." But that's just grammar (I assume English is not your first language as these are things a native speaker wouldn't get wrong, especially not the first one). Make your thesis statement stand on its own. Don't tell the reader it's a thesis statement. So no "In this essay" or "I will argue." Just tell us what overpopulation does to urban areas. Then prove it.
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2018-11-08T05:12:12Z (almost 6 years ago)
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