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If your premise is that she's really good at certain things and awful at others, your opening scene should show both. Without explaining it! Just show. I'd open with a scene of her at her best. ...
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2019-12-20T00:40:32Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T10:08:48Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/40014 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
If your premise is that she's really good at certain things and awful at others, your opening scene should show both. Without explaining it! Just show. I'd open with a scene of her at her best. Then weave in some of the places where she struggles.
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System
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2018-11-08T22:37:40Z (about 6 years ago)
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