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This statement is an introduction to the review of related literature chapter for my case study at school. Maybe presents is a better word for accounts, but that's it? The style is OK for a formal...

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hish5yau‭ · 2019-12-08T10:13:45Z (almost 5 years ago)

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This statement is an introduction to the review of related literature chapter for my case study at school.

Maybe _presents_ is a better word for _accounts_, but that's it? The style is OK for a formal work, and I have also seen this pattern in the introductory statements of other literature.

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System‭ · 2018-11-21T02:13:45Z (about 6 years ago)

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