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I would set it off into its own lines and use italics. Since it will happen multiple times, the reader will assume that it's background and characters may or may not hear what's said (or even noti...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-20T00:40:33Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T10:15:27Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/40403 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
I would set it off into its own lines and use italics. Since it will happen multiple times, the reader will assume that it's background and characters may or may not hear what's said (or even notice it). If you want to be clear who does and doesn't hear certain lines, you'll have to say so. > Luzia looked up with a start. "Russia? We're bombing Russia?" > > "Mmmmmuh?" Geraldo put down his pen. "What?"
#1: Imported from external source
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2018-11-28T20:06:43Z (almost 6 years ago)
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