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Q&A The problem with beginning

The opening lines generally set the tone of the book. Why are you starting with your protagonist running? Is that the theme of the story, are they running away from something physical or emotiona...

posted 6y ago by Matt Hollands‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Matt Hollands‭ · 2019-12-08T10:16:05Z (almost 5 years ago)
The opening lines generally set the tone of the book. Why are you starting with your protagonist running? Is that the theme of the story, are they running away from something physical or emotional?

Take the first line from Pride and Prejudice:

"It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife"

That is indeed the main motivation of Bingley, Mr Colins and even Darcy and Wickham. It's also the preoccupation of (most) of the female characters. The opening line sets the expectations of the reader for what is going to follow.

So my answer is to think about the overall theme of your story and write a beginning that informs the reader of the journey they are about to embark on. The art is doing that without being blatantly obvious about it.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-11-30T10:06:19Z (almost 6 years ago)
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