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Writing a crying scene makes me accidentally do repetitions like "the tears which were on her face broke down into a slithering stream..." and then putting the word tears again and again. What s...
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System
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2019-12-08T10:21:20Z (about 5 years ago)
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Shirayuki hugon
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2019-12-08T10:21:20Z (about 5 years ago)
Writing a crying scene makes me accidentally do repetitions like "the tears which were on her face broke down into a slithering stream..." and then putting the word tears again and again. What should I do to make sure I avoid that? ## How can I write an effective crying scene, without repeating the same detail over and over?
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System
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2018-12-13T15:13:12Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 7