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You do this in italics, without quote marks, usually as a new paragraph (like dialogue). It reminds me of when I visited Shirakami-Sanchi, that forest up North. If we see the thoughts of more tha...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-19T22:13:37Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T10:22:18Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
You do this in italics, without quote marks, usually as a new paragraph (like dialogue). _It reminds me of when I visited Shirakami-Sanchi, that forest up North._ If we see the thoughts of more than one person, attribute it like dialogue, but not in italics. _It reminds me of when I visited Shirakami-Sanchi, that forest up North,_ he thought. "He thought to himself" is redundant, unless you have demonstrated that he is telepathic and can choose to think to somebody else.
#1: Imported from external source
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2018-12-17T14:09:45Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 2