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I think adding more text about an anonymous and irrelevant character would destroy any tension you may have built. You have some anonymous character, who is taken prisoner in the event that MC's pa...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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System
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2019-12-18T21:34:22Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T10:27:49Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/40985 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
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I think adding more text about an anonymous and irrelevant character would destroy any tension you may have built. You have some anonymous character, who is taken prisoner in the event that MC's party need a bargaining chip. This anonymous character is thus defined enough from the perspective of the story, and as long as it does not serve any other purpose in the plot, it could be temporarily replaced by a bag of potatoes as a placeholder. However, there is another place where you can add excellent tension. In fact, you have the conflict within the MC's party on whether to kidnap Bag-of-Potatoes or to kill it. You can write down the heated argument in favor of either solution, and even use the grudge that may linger afterwards to create some cracks in the unity of the party.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-01-02T17:16:10Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 3