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Q&A Is using too many different metres and rhyming schemes bad?

Find yourself an audience. Here's a situation where it's impossible to guess based on your description. We have no way of knowing if your poem is a hot mess, a psychedelic journey, or an literary...

posted 6y ago by Cyn‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-20T00:40:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T10:31:37Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T10:31:37Z (almost 5 years ago)
 **Find yourself an audience.**

Here's a situation where it's impossible to guess based on your description. We have no way of knowing if your poem is a hot mess, a psychedelic journey, or an literary analysis adventure. Maybe it's brilliant, or maybe it just needs a good editor.

So find friends and family who enjoy poetry and will be honest with you. Join a writing group. Take a poetry writing class. Bribe a writing teacher. Whatever it takes to get people to sit down and listen.

Read your poem out loud. It's the best way to test rhythm and call out awkwardness. Even reading it out loud to yourself will help with that. This is how you'll find out if all those meters are discordant or a symphony. Make your revisions then repeat. And again.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-01-09T07:08:53Z (almost 6 years ago)
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