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For example, Amanda just lost a battle in her life. When she met her best friend and mother, she lost it and started crying. The other characters comforted her with a hug, some talks, and some pats...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T10:45:11Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Benjamin
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2019-12-08T10:45:11Z (about 5 years ago)
For example, Amanda just lost a battle in her life. When she met her best friend and mother, she lost it and started crying. The other characters comforted her with a hug, some talks, and some pats on the back. Instead of saying 'he reached for her shoulders, he extended his arms, she held her cheeks/face, etc', how can I get better at describing such sentimental human interactions? In short, how do I show (but not tell) the way the mother and best friend physically interact with the character - Amanda - in the example?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-01-29T20:57:37Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 5