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As a reader, I wouldn't think twice about that brief "break" of POV. I also don't generally analyze "what point of view is this in?" while reading. I think, if it works in the story and flows well,...
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System
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2019-12-08T10:49:20Z (over 4 years ago)
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Gwendolyn
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2019-12-08T10:49:20Z (over 4 years ago)
As a reader, I wouldn't think twice about that brief "break" of POV. I also don't generally analyze "what point of view is this in?" while reading. I think, if it works in the story and flows well, **don't over think it**. I just recently finished an award winning book that is third person limited, but for about three pages I spent time in a minor character's head. That "broke the rules", I noticed it, but didn't mind because I liked the story. It helped moved the narrative along.
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System
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2019-02-06T17:58:10Z (about 5 years ago)
Original score: 7