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Q&A Is it okay to say what the character infers about other characters thoughts as fact in third person limited?

This will be a matter of opinion. My opinion is no, it is not okay. I write in 3PL myself, exclusively, and everything I write is as if the MC is seeing it. You are doing nothing but saving space,...

posted 5y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-19T22:13:39Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T10:49:21Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T10:49:21Z (almost 5 years ago)
This will be a matter of opinion. My opinion is **no,** it is not okay. I write in 3PL myself, exclusively, and everything I write is as if the MC is seeing it.

You are doing nothing but saving space, and saving space is not important. I would probably write that scene as:

> Alice sat up proudly, then shrunk back down.
> 
> _She just realized where she was,_ Bob thought.

But, since Bob is the only one that _can_ think [whose thoughts are ever shown], and this is indicated by italics, the following would suffice:

> Alice sat up proudly, then shrunk back down.
> 
> _She just realized where she was._

Then, because things should be filtered through Bob's mind, I'd add some take on it; Bob should feel something about what he has seen. Not just report it. Perhaps he's sympathetic.

> Alice sat up proudly, then shrunk back down.
> 
> _She just realized where she was. Too bad, anywhere else and she's got a right to be proud._

My narrator is not the MC, and the narrator can describe visual things in ways Bob would not. For example, "sitting up proudly". I can't be certain Alice is "proud", but I can be just as certain, visually, as saying Alice is Angry, afraid, grieving, etc. So I don't mind the attribution of "proudly".

I also don't mind if the 3P narrator gets poetic or imaginative in their descriptions of a setting, in ways the MC would not.

But as far as knowing what is in any character's mind: that is what the "LIMITED" means. Find a way for Bob to interpret what is in Alice's mind. And make it clear, don't make us infer what Bob inferred.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-02-06T17:58:15Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 13