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Q&A College Essay - Thesis and Topic - Hard to differentiate

I have a hook. But my thesis seems to be more like a restated topic rather than a piece that encapsulates my topic with a claim. Any tips on how to fix this? I don't want a weak topic, but I also d...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by TheRedBandit‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Question structure essay
#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T10:52:22Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/42162
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar TheRedBandit‭ · 2019-12-08T10:52:22Z (almost 5 years ago)
I have a hook. But my thesis seems to be more like a restated topic rather than a piece that encapsulates my topic with a claim. Any tips on how to fix this? I don't want a weak topic, but I also don't want to have my thesis as a restated topic. Maybe I am misunderstanding the difference between the two concepts... Any help is greatly appreciated. Also, first time college student. This is for English 101.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-02-12T03:59:51Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 3