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I have a hook. But my thesis seems to be more like a restated topic rather than a piece that encapsulates my topic with a claim. Any tips on how to fix this? I don't want a weak topic, but I also d...
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System
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2019-12-08T10:52:22Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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TheRedBandit
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2019-12-08T10:52:22Z (about 5 years ago)
I have a hook. But my thesis seems to be more like a restated topic rather than a piece that encapsulates my topic with a claim. Any tips on how to fix this? I don't want a weak topic, but I also don't want to have my thesis as a restated topic. Maybe I am misunderstanding the difference between the two concepts... Any help is greatly appreciated. Also, first time college student. This is for English 101.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-02-12T03:59:51Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 3