How can I improve the grammar of this paragraph about the role of internet? [closed]
Closed by System†on Jun 14, 2011 at 19:30
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People use computers for many different activities, from reading online newspapers to listening to music. No one can expect that people can use internet to make a revolution. The main part to the January 25th revolution was the internet. After the death of "Khalid Saeed" a group of cultural youth founded a web site on face book. That site played an important role to spread the awareness among youth and then they began to make a questionnaire to people who want to call for their rights to come to Tahreer Square. The revolution began with idea and completed by the announcement of the resignation to show that "If the people want to live, the destiny should respond". Finally, we can sum up by saying that modern technology as the internet and face book played great role in the 25th revolution.
Please help me to write this paragraph correctly, with particular attention to the grammar. If you can tell me what's wrong, or rewrite the paragraph correctly, I will be thankful.
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